martes, 30 de noviembre de 2010

DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

Descriptive Essay
My heroe “Seco”
1.       Introduction
1.1   How I met “Seco”
1.2   Moments we shared
1.3   Why he is my heroe?
2.       Likes
2.1 He used to box
2.2 He is part of Army
2.3 He defends honesty
3.  As a friend
3.1 He is a lovely friend
3.2 He is amusing
3.3 He protects me
4. As soldier
4.1 He is a kind-heart person
4.2 He is combative when the situation needs
4.3 He is plucky
5. Conclusion
5.1 The moment when I met Seco
5.2 Moments we spent together
5.3 What makes him special for me?

It was a normal day at school; I was with my best friend in that moment, when he walked in front of me. He walked self-assured, saying hi to my friend. He looked lively like his soul was full of happiness and love. Something in him told me that he was gentle, vivacious, sincere and zestful. His energy was very bright and amusing, something in me wanted to know more about him, he das something mysterious, so the next day that I saw him, I started to say hi to him and both had common friends, so it was not difficult to start a new friendship with a boy that made me fell faithful. Since that day, we were friends. When we were in high school we always went to parties together, shared our feelings about life, shared our experiences in our relationship and we have made our life. He is a soldier, a gentle soldier abundant of love and compassion. Not comfortable with insecurity in our country, wishful and anxious to make a better Mexico.
Seco was a fighter. He practice boxing. He loved the sport; the emotions that boxing produced to him. For Seco, boxing is a way to be prepared for our own life, face a problem when is going to hit you. He sees fights like the way to see life, when he touches the opponents is like he is touching his own life and when he wins is like he is winning to himself. Maybe the sound of hits makes him feel alive and the taste of hitting another person is as he tastes his own blood. He is a combative boy that fights to every problem which presents to his face. That is why he loves Army, for him, it is his life, his passion, so he plucky defends us, that is why I am so proud of him. Even if he has to sacrifice his own life or he is unwell, he always is helpful and protector. Another reason because I am proud of him is because his honesty. He is one of the most honest people that I had met, he does not know the word lie and cowardly. Seco has a dominating thought that allows him to be fair, kind-hearted and mature.
Seco is a lovely boy that cares about his friends. Sometimes he does not show his feelings, maybe because he has always in mind death. He sees cruel and horrible deaths everyday and he knows that he can die in one second. The sound of ambulances, police cars and alarms remember him that death is at the next door. He can touch death with his hands and feel it as his own death. Sometimes he smells the stinky bodies of death people, but it is part of his passion, he does it without complaining. Maybe those are the reasons why sometimes he keeps his distance, to do not hurt our hearts, but on the other hand, he wants to spend moments with his friends, he is a jolly 19 year-old boy, when he spent time with me, he is an amusing, vivacious and dynamic boy that always makes jokes to makes me feel better. He is very funny even though he has to pass through very difficult and horrible moments. He knows how it is Mexico, he knows the real situation of this country, but he wants me to be a peaceful girl, enjoying life, so he is always caring about me, protecting me.
He is a soldier, but even though people think that soldiers are cruel, aggressive, dangerous and evil, they are not. In this case, Seco is kind-hearted; he always thinks in people and takes care of them. He feels when people are peaceful and when they need protection. I think that when he protects people he can taste victory. But he is also combative; he can smell when people are not fair and evil, so he fights for Mexico. He is fearless, he is not afraid even to die. He is plucky when he hears the sound of help

sábado, 20 de noviembre de 2010

Cholos VS Rancholos

1. Introduction
1.1 Definition of cholos
1.2 Defintion of rancholos
2. Way they dress
2.1 Cholos use genuine brand clothes
2.2 Rancholos use non genuine brand clothes
3. Why do they were rosaries?
3. 1 Cholos use rosaries as symbols of their faith to God
3.2 Rancholos use rosaries as fashion accesory
4. They are social gangss
4.1 Cholos and rancholos want to be independent of society
4.2 Cholos and rancholos follow the USA culture
5. Conclusion
5.1 What are cholos?
5.2 What are rancholos?

Cholos are social gans that are against by society. This gang is very common in cities, because there are a lot of youth people that are finding themselves. Rancholos are a group of people trying to be like Cholos. Rancholos are also discriminated by society, including by Cholos, because Cholos think that they only want to look like them. A big difference between them are their faith to God, the clothes, but but are also violent people that are against the society. The origins of these gans are from the USA.

A very important thing for Cholos are the way they drees. For them, clothes mean a lot, like the way they are and their personalities, how they take care of themselves. All Cholos use genuine brand clothes, most of them is D&G and ECKO, size XXL and XXXL, using white, black, brown and blue colors, however they do not use pink, yellow or purple. Their clothes have to be ironing very carefuly and their clothes have to be very clean. Rancholos use non genuine brand clothes. Most of them are low income people thar worry about what they are going to eat instead of buying expensive clothes. They do not worry about the way they dress, if they are genuine brand clothes, it only matter that looks like. Rancholos use all the colors and use sizes XL and XXL. Some of them iron their own clothes, but not all of them.

A very significant characteristic of Cholos is their faith to God. They are very catholics and all of Cholos wear a rosary around their neck, some of them have tattoos with the image of Jesus or Virgin Mary on their bodies. They think that they will take care of them, a rosary is a symbol of protection. Rancholos also wear rosaries,  but they do not have tattoos. Rosaries for them are part of the attire, a way to look good, like Cholos. Some of them are catholics, people that believe in God, but most of them use rosaries as a fashionable accesory.

Cholos and Rancholos are gangs not accepted by society, because these gangs not look like the society. They do not act as society, most of the times using violence to get money or defendig their territory. Because most of the members of these gangs do not work. The dress of this gangs is not allowed in the society because it is not the look for normal people. Cholos ad Rancholos´origins come from USA, by the immigrant people. Immigrant people were the people who started these gangs.

Cholos are gangs that dress very well with genuine brand clothes, are very catholics. Rancholos do not use genuine brand clothes, some of them are catholics, but they do not have tatoos of Jesus, only wear rosaries as accesories. Both gangs are against the society. For them, all the people have to have the same opportunities, no matter their appareance. Cholos and Rancholos started in USA.

martes, 2 de noviembre de 2010

Argumentative essay

1.       Introduction
1.1   How boxing started
1.2   Nowadays women practice boxing
1.3   Famous female bóxers
2.       Women have the same opportunities as men
2.1   Why allow women in boxing?
2.2   Women can do the same physical training
2.3   Women can follow the same discipline as men
3.       Women are also skillful
3.1   Women are also fast
3.2   Women are strong
3.3   With obvious reason women are more kind-heart
4.       Men think boxing is not appropiate for women
4.1   Men think female bóxers not look goog boxing
4.2   Men think women are physically weak
4.3   Men think female bóxers are dangerous
5.       Conclusion
5.1   Origins of boxing
5.2   Place of female boxers
Boxing stared in 1700 AC, in Greece. In that year, people thought that was a game of Gods, so was practiced in the Olympic Games. But the fights are different before, In Greece, boxers did not use gloves, only leather, and the fights were so explosive and aggressive, that sometimes they kill each other. In XX century, was when women started to boxing, spite nowadays this sport is for women and men, in the Olympic Games women are not allow. The first champion women was Elizabeth Wlkinson, but some of them are Ana María Torres, Cristina Hammer, Marie Rieder, Marcela Acuña, Yvonne Caples, Para Draine, etc.
 Nowadays women are allowed in boxing. Women have a place in this sport, but the question why is very general. We are in XXI century and our society can face to face the equality and the idea that women and men have the same rights. Also they have the same capacity of training; maybe men have more ability doing some kind of exercise and women doing another, so women have the same discipline to train all day. Any person can develop themselves in any sport no matter if they are men or women.
People can think that women are not skillful because it is not common that women practiced a lot of exercise when they were younger, but women can develop their skills faster than men. Women can be fast and strong as other men if they do exercise and practice. A typically characteristic of boxers is that they have to have kind-heart, it is a very important characteristic that not all of male boxers develop because they think that have a good heart is girly, but female boxers are different, when they fight, they give all their hearts, but at finish fighting they leave the boxer in the ring and the women is out.
Despite women have the same capacity of boxing, men think that they are not strong enough to practice this tough sport, because they think women still been the weak sex and because of that when men look female boxing they think it is inappropriate and dikes for them, only men can box. Boxing is a men´s sport that only men can practice. Other men look female boxers as a thret, because their personalities and with obvious reason the female boxers are dangerous.
Boxing started in Greece in 1700 AC, thinking that this sport was God´s sport, but this sport has been changed in their articles they can use and the rules. Before boxers did not use gloves, they used leather and they did not used protector on their bodies. Now times had changed in every sense, now, women can also fight. They have an important place in this sport, even women cannot fight in Olympic Games, and they are trying to get the same equality for women and men. In some countries are not allow women in boxing, places like Affanistan, Egypt and some oriental countries.